Friday, January 23, 2009

Fate

It had been about six years since my brothers and I hadn’t seen our aunts or cousins. We were all very excited to visit them in Indiana. We were expecting very cold weather, you know snowstorms and of the like, and so packed very warm for the trip. As we picked up our luggage in the overcrowded room, I searched around the room looking for my aunt. I could not find her if my life depended on it, she said she would be waiting in front of the gift shop but was nowhere to be found. I decided to give her a call and as the phone was ringing I saw a small lady with a little boy attached to her hand pick up her phone, I couldn’t believe it she was right in front of me the whole time but I just didn’t recognize her. I rushed over and gave her a huge hug as I towered over her and the little boy and hadn’t remembered being that much taller than her. It was so great being able to see her again, she was one of my favorite aunts growing up, I would follow her everywhere and cry every time she left the room (well this is what they told me, I was too young to recall). I looked down at the little boy and asked him his name, he answered shyly, “Luuis.” I asked him if he knew who I was, he paused and then replied, “My sister.” We all laughed, I guess he didn’t fully understand that we are cousins and just knew that we are related in some way. As we spent more time with them I realized that there was something different. My aunt just seemed a lot happier. During our stay there she would always be singing praises to the Lord, at the dinner table, in the car rides, pretty much anywhere. At first I thought it was pretty weird. I hadn’t seen her like this before but after a while I wanted to have this same passion, I wanted to share in this happiness that she had. After coming back home I wanted things to change, I began to get more involved at church and am starting to understand that joyfulness that my aunt has.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Diana. Welcome to the class! I really enjoyed the story you've told here about your aunt, and the ways in which she inspired you. The way a writer describes other people can often be very telling about who the person is themselves! In this way, your classmates and I can learn a great deal about you from this portrait you have shared. Thanks for that, and welcome to the course!

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  2. Hey Diana! Nice job on your first entry! It was nice reading about how inspiring your aunt is to you. Its absolutely wonderful how someones attitude can be life changing to others. And your little cousin sounds really cute!
    Can't wait to read more of your stories!

    --Arthi

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  3. I love reading stories about inspirational figures and I'm glad your Aunt can be that to you. The only tips I have are just to be careful on redundant words (this only happened once towards the very beginning of the story), sentence structure, and be sure to separate your paragraphs. Good job though!

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  4. Diana, thank you for sharing your story about your Aunt. She seems very interesting. I'd love for there to be more focus on the moment where you were personally inspired and that shift in your heart to change that part of yourself. Overall, great job :).

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